Fun
The melody to this song is really happy and fun, the piano parts sound swell (but the intro is a tad repetetive), and the bass is nice and smooth. The transitions were a little shaky. The first 'pause' in the song sounded really cool, the second one just seemed like a bit of overuse of the pause to me.
Anyways, really creative melody you've got here. For being your second song, this is spectacular. Can't wait to hear more from you in the future.
Cheers
--totojimbob